The reason why I feel the need to re-write it is because I want to make it longer and add a few more things to it so that my plot will work out better. Plus, as I thought about it a little more, I wouldn't really have much of a choice but to re-write the prologue 'ccause it wouldn't make sense if I continued on with it. There are some things that I left out and some things I wanted to include in the first half since I didn't want the second half to be so long that you guys won't want to read it.
Also, a reminder to those whom I have/am RP'ing with on my other account, my FC's personalities will be completely different in the story. In an RP, I just go with the flow so that it won't be boring. ^^ Yeah, that means the usual nice happy Janet will be deceased during the story. ^^ And the upbeat stubborn Ray will be a whole lot more insane. So, stay tuned!! (That was so corny. xDD)
J.P. out!!










